Becalmed Poem by Hanan Muzafar

Becalmed

Rating: 4.8


Burdened wood to carry away,
breath heard, and sigh afraid,
Snow melted down on surface,
and mountain still in haze:
What died, and broke inside,
nothing can bring that back—
Tried to make a dent,
found and opened a door,
Fragile part of fragment,
where emotions reside,
and rational broke on sorrow:
Lonely I wander here,
and in rain I shall go—
Becalmed sail in wind,
passed through edges of space,
Thunder lost in storm,
with burns and wounds,
flowing on walls:
Calm and silent, when torn apart,
and leaves left behind.

Becalmed
Tuesday, November 6, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,despair,dreams,failure,fall,hopelessness,loss,love,sad,sorrow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 06 November 2018

We must fight everyday to be happy, yes we will have some sad days but we must fight for the good days. A great poem.

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Touching 06 December 2018

and in rain I shall go— Becalmed sail in wind, touching poem you have good written, thanks many

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Savita Tyagi 06 December 2018

So touchingly painful yet so heartwarming. If pain could be the balm for a wounded life this poem heals beautifully. Congratulations and thank you for sharing.

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Tom Allport 06 December 2018

A poem of how sometimes it is hard to move on to better and more positive things? ........well written Hanan

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Adrian Flett 06 December 2018

A sad and dark poem that lends no window of light or hope.

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Rajnish Manga 06 December 2018

Reality of life underscored beautifully. Thanks & Congrats.

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Jennifer Birchall 06 December 2018

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us, its full of emotion. Congratulations on poem of the day

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Muzahidul Reza 06 December 2018

an outstanding poem has been greatly shared, ....... we are going to fight against feelingless stones, consequently, output is nothing but damaging, great poem, congrats and thanks for being poet and poem of bay, + 10 I think you will like to read my poems,

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 December 2018

Lost in storm! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Alfonso 06 December 2018

The poem raises great sentiment when you write, and in rain i shall go, I read and think its great meaning

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