I wish to be free man
Nice person and human
Not bound by any bondage
With prayer’s strength written on holy pag4
I never question
Or mention
About golden teachings
It is beyond my reaching
I only bow down
To get protection
From unknown ills
With good faith still
I want peaceful journey
With blessings from an almighty
I have no other desire
But peacefully to retire
I shall create no disharmony
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What I want to try and establish
No more wishful thinking before I am perished
What on earth we are doing?
Not properly praying
But laying stone
For by gone
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Just be yourself, Mehtaji and we all love you for that! Thanks for sharing these lovely thoughts in your inimitable poetic style! Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad Apr 13,2015
I want peaceful journey With blessings from an almighty I have no other desire But peacefully to retire...a humble desire dear poet. I love your earnest expression!
Appreciations Sir, if everyone was like you, this world will be a better place. Rajeshwari Srinivasan, Mumbai Apr 14,2015
I wish to be free man Nice person and human Hasmukh Bhai, you are already that, milk of human kindness. There is no need to wish. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Apr 13,2015
Man is born free; but everywhere he is in chains, Rousseau says. It is a social construct. Let’s hope and act to be free at least in thought. Good poem. P Nasarudheen., Kasargod.Kerala Apr 13,2015
Wonderful poetic efforts to visualize the hidden human desire prevailing within. The world has turned robotic today and we are always missing ourselves. Thanks a lot for your exact human portrayal. Rabindra Kumar Bharti, Bokaro Steel City Apr 13,2015
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I wish to be free man Nice person and human