Wednesday, October 2, 2019

Being A Senior Citizen- Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think I want to go back to basics,
With just enough energy for tactics
Needed for my everyday living, don't
Have time to dissect all my yearnings.
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Savita Tyagi
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I would never want to lose my smiles To see and greet a friend's face or Hide my excitement for a friendly voice. To enjoy a beautiful poem or get lost in It's ravishing thoughts and enchanting words. Words of a sincere human being dedicated to respect others feelings! ...10

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Anil Kumar Panda 03 November 2019

'I marvel at life's simple wonders, am At leisure to coalesce my emotions, To watch the pendulum of my heart Swing or be still to its own rhythm…..'..is so nice. Loved it. Thanks very much.

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Yes it's nice going back to basics, recognizing the beautiful the experience, Thanks a lot dear poet.

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Mahtab Bangalee 15 October 2019

the seed (basic/senior) now the tree (by the passage of time) basic always basic by born yeah just need utilization power seniority will be a grade throne if it pursues the true jurisdiction

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 09 October 2019

what made you skip my comment ma'am angry be not kindly few friends I have on ph only ur one who is sincerely your poetry is lover Iam also a SENIOR CITIZEN YOU KNOW IT

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 October 2019

No more pondering on world problems, a senior citizen always thinks for goodness of society. There is no need to lose smile. Life should be happy always. This poem is emotional. Reading it again I feel very happy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

JUST gave you a humble 10 plus and my poetic vote

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 October 2019

Let me just pay my ritualistic Homage to the rays of radiant sun, Take a walk in the golden sunset, Watch the silvery gleam of crescent moon And be lost in the mystique of star studded sky. HOW TRUE AND REAL POET TEACHER R U. DO READ MY 21 CDN SERIES 5 HAVE BEEN POSTED YOU HAVE ALSO READ ONE OR TWO FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS I BOW TO THANK YOU MA''AM

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 October 2019

Being A Senior Citizen, a poem well written, and from where i am put up at present- a small hill in the midst of a busy city, with its own milieu, and from where this poem connects to me, me a senior citizen plus a score. Nice reading your poem after a long time

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Savita Tyagi 03 October 2019

Thank you so much for reading and for your inspiring comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 October 2019

I would never want to lose my smiles To see and greet a friend's face or Hide my excitement for a friendly voice......impressive lines with lofty theme. This is really a beautiful poem on senior citizen having thrilling expression with nice collocation, Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem.10

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Savita Tyagi 03 October 2019

Thank you so much for reading and for your encouraging comment.

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