Being Human Poem by Eddie Roa

Being Human

Rating: 5.0


Lord I do not wish
To hide from you,
I’m too lazy, I say

You molded me
From lowly clay,
Am I to blame?

Can I help it
If I err?
Only human, I say

Free will is
A handy phrase but,
Is it really there?

Redemption I can’t own
The Fall, as well,
Not mine to will, I say

It is God’s grace
If success is undeserved,
Failure surely the Devil’s

Conscience perplexed,
Helpless yet blamed,
Innocent but guilty

Simple minded me
In a quandary, how else,
Accept the mystery, I say

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 05 February 2009

The mystery of existence in plain words. It is more than a prayer and God will surely listen. Lovely poem 10.

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Glenn Mark Amor 03 February 2009

Being human is being powerless in so many aspects, and not knowing the right answer to everything... this is what I believe. Good poem.

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Subbaraman N V 02 February 2009

Realisation is the greatest solution! Once done, the human becomes divine!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

' You moulded me / From lowly clay / Am I to blame? ', I think these lines open up the whole mystry of the human being. Nice poetic thoughts, Eddie. Regards Naseer

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Kesav Easwaran 02 February 2009

'You molded me From lowly clay, Am I to blame? ' lovely lines...much impressive...a good plead towards God you make, Eddie...and quite reasonable and justifiable too...10

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Lost Skiing 10 May 2009

Nice, it really describes the thoughts that come into my mind from time to time! ! !

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Original Unknown Girl 14 April 2009

Fab scribings.... love it! HG: -) xx

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Gargi Saha 08 February 2009

A nice write...........................

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Antonio Liao 05 February 2009

what a simple poem....with dignity.....i like it......a wisdom of time reveals in a very touching soul...very nice..Thank you my friend and God bless

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 05 February 2009

Recognizing is one thing, accepting that we are but humans is another...both well penned in here.

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Eddie Roa

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Manila. Philippines
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