Lord I do not wish
To hide from you,
I’m too lazy, I say
You molded me
From lowly clay,
Am I to blame?
Can I help it
If I err?
Only human, I say
Free will is
A handy phrase but,
Is it really there?
Redemption I can’t own
The Fall, as well,
Not mine to will, I say
It is God’s grace
If success is undeserved,
Failure surely the Devil’s
Conscience perplexed,
Helpless yet blamed,
Innocent but guilty
Simple minded me
In a quandary, how else,
Accept the mystery, I say
excellent write.....this one smartly brings out the struggle a human goes through.. 10 for sure.
All the world is a stage on which we play the assigned role. In the drama innumerable souls, a little known and unknown much, enjoy its beauty as such, submit to Him and His Grace touch. CP
We all doubt our capability to please God, but please him we do when we thank him.
'You molded me From lowly clay, Am I to blame? ' lovely lines...much impressive...a good plead towards God you make, Eddie...and quite reasonable and justifiable too...10
Nice, it really describes the thoughts that come into my mind from time to time! ! !
what a simple poem....with dignity.....i like it......a wisdom of time reveals in a very touching soul...very nice..Thank you my friend and God bless
Recognizing is one thing, accepting that we are but humans is another...both well penned in here.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nice style.. I say you got it good. Amazing write, keep it up!