Introduction: Sometimes your life sinks down a little, and when it does try and fight for Islam and have faith in Allah, ask for His divine guidance, believe and respect everyone, don't hold any grudge against someone, forgive them and surrender completely to Allah and believe in His graceful light.
Don't fall apart,
When light fades away
Look deep in your heart,
Allah will aid your way
Nothing feels wrong,
While nature sings song
Days go along,
Until we're gone
Don't deceive,
Just learn to heed
Do believe,
And you will forgive.
Very amazing subject: D your faith is so strong, and your words so true. You just got to keep your faith in the Almighty and everything will work out ^.^ amazing work! Keep it up!
forgiveness is the key to the door that opens into life... like this one a lot!
Subhanallah...yet another exceptional write brother Aqeb! ! The message is very vital and the rhyme is just perfect...I like the line 'Nothing feels wrong, While nature sings song' - when you hear the birds sing and twitter, you feel so wonderful! ! I do not understand why some people here are suggesting this is off pace a little but to me and to all Muslim poets who have commented here feels differently, and seriously people? Aqeb has done A LOT of beautiful pieces...I guess it's true what they say - The greater you become, greater the criticism arise even if it's by 1 inch in a tiny corner... The rhymes go very well! ! ! This is a couplet, it follows the order nicely: - apart, away, heart, way, wrong, song, along, gone, deceive, heed, believe, forgive ...This rhyme can't get any more rhythmic! It's short and perfect the way it is. 10/10 Masha'Allah! continue your write for Allah my friend! !
lovely piece. If Almighty Allah can forgive, , who are we to refuse?
That is so poetic...touching...sigh...as long as you believe...then what could go wrong...smiles.
I read this poem and began humming it as if it were a tune. Keep up the good Work
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
forgiveness is the key to the door that opens into life.. you inspire me to write more.. thank you