Believe & Forgive Poem by Aqeb Benazir Ibn Minar

Believe & Forgive

Rating: 4.3


Introduction: Sometimes your life sinks down a little, and when it does try and fight for Islam and have faith in Allah, ask for His divine guidance, believe and respect everyone, don't hold any grudge against someone, forgive them and surrender completely to Allah and believe in His graceful light.


Don't fall apart,
When light fades away
Look deep in your heart,
Allah will aid your way

Nothing feels wrong,
While nature sings song
Days go along,
Until we're gone

Don't deceive,
Just learn to heed
Do believe,
And you will forgive.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zainab Zaheen 16 August 2011

forgiveness is the key to the door that opens into life.. you inspire me to write more.. thank you

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Chris Haifley 15 August 2011

Very amazing subject: D your faith is so strong, and your words so true. You just got to keep your faith in the Almighty and everything will work out ^.^ amazing work! Keep it up!

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Eric Cockrell 14 August 2011

forgiveness is the key to the door that opens into life... like this one a lot!

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Muhammad Ali 10 August 2011

Subhanallah...yet another exceptional write brother Aqeb! ! The message is very vital and the rhyme is just perfect...I like the line 'Nothing feels wrong, While nature sings song' - when you hear the birds sing and twitter, you feel so wonderful! ! I do not understand why some people here are suggesting this is off pace a little but to me and to all Muslim poets who have commented here feels differently, and seriously people? Aqeb has done A LOT of beautiful pieces...I guess it's true what they say - The greater you become, greater the criticism arise even if it's by 1 inch in a tiny corner... The rhymes go very well! ! ! This is a couplet, it follows the order nicely: - apart, away, heart, way, wrong, song, along, gone, deceive, heed, believe, forgive ...This rhyme can't get any more rhythmic! It's short and perfect the way it is. 10/10 Masha'Allah! continue your write for Allah my friend! !

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 09 August 2011

This poem has made my day. keep it up

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Noor Othman 10 July 2017

nice one! keep it up

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Nurain Ali-balogun 12 July 2012

lovely piece. If Almighty Allah can forgive, , who are we to refuse?

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Kaila George 19 October 2011

That is so poetic...touching...sigh...as long as you believe...then what could go wrong...smiles.

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Izbella Omelon 05 October 2011

Wow~~ what a rhythmic poem! ! ! It's great! ! ! :)

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Anthony Zeigler 29 August 2011

I read this poem and began humming it as if it were a tune. Keep up the good Work

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