Believe In Me? Poem by Angelic Warrior

Believe In Me?

Rating: 3.9


If I told you I tried real hard
would you believe me?
If I spoke to you about how I feel
would you believe me?
If I spilled everything
would you believe me?
If I showed you my dream world
would you believe me?
If I painted my life on a page
would you believe me?
If I danced the dangerous game that I play
would you believe me?
If I never lied once
would you believe me?
If I gave my all
would you believe me?

Why is it that when I give you my only truth you never believe in me?

Sunday, May 31, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: believe
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adi Cox 10 July 2009

This poem addresses the problems and comlexities of communication in relationships. Sometimes it is impossible to believe someone. If I said 'I am a liar' would you beleive me? This is a paradox. Nice poem.10/10.

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Lady Grace 14 June 2009

believe in me and trust..believe in me and stay..believe in me and let's enjoy together the life..this is a beautiful poem..grace

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sky dreams 14 June 2009

this reminds me of my relationship with my father.. very good thoughts expressed very well.10

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Thanks for the share of this wonderful piece...this gives much to reflect on...thank you...well penned

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