Bells Of Dusk Poem by Sandra Fowler

Bells Of Dusk

Rating: 5.0


Your hand grows gnarled.
It makes a fretwork shadow on my face.
The judgment of the mood is Biblical.
I hear you counting red leaves as they fall.

Frost angels write
Their thousand times ten thousand names on panes.
The heavy candlelabra of gray trees
Lifts ribbon flames of fading warmth in prayer.

Is this the end?
The woodsmoke of the dusk is indigo.
Your gnarled hand has become less intricate.
Its pressure no more than a passing cloud.

The bells of dusk
Ring clearly from an Appalachian height.
The cold, gold force of sunset is a shout.
Silence reverberates in brevity.

I stand alone
My cheekbones brushed by high white peaks of wind.
The ancient whisper comes from everywhere,
'This count includes the tears that make a sea'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bill Grace 30 September 2007

And for me the last two lines are simply electricity. Bill Grace

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Bill Grace 30 September 2007

Talk about a poet who gives us a reframe of the world. I find lines 5,6, & 7 of particular power, if not liberation. Bill Grace

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Alison Cassidy 18 September 2007

Reverence is the word that comes to mind after reading this wonderful poem. Bells of Dust - for whom the Bell Tolls - images of majesty with an unpretentious touch. Sandra, this piece is thoroughly satisfying - like a perfectly cooked meal. Your work continues to surprise and delight. love, Allie xxxx

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Jim Foulk 21 January 2007

jRobert Frost knew how to write outdoor and nature poems very well. Well you my lady do a very fine job of doing it also. you are a very fine poet, keep 'em coming.

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R H 07 January 2007

Beautiful imagery abounds - I love the image of 'The heavy candlelabra of gray trees' - it's so evocative. You create such a presence with your words Sandra. Simply lovely. Justine

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 October 2022

A wonderful poem Sandra. You have beautifully presented things that are predestined and scheduled.5 stars for this thoughtful write Sandra dear.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 18 September 2009

I can hear church bells where I live. They're not so picturesque as yours.

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premji premji 08 June 2009

the last line clears 'why sea is so salty'

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 June 2009

The contents of this write stupendous, scaling the heights of your imagination Sandra from beginning to end - Bravo.

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nomad omnia 20 March 2009

Amazing Sandra, I can smell the dampness of dusk and feel the sunset in my eyes. I love it. N

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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