Belonging Poem by Udaya R. Tennakoon

Belonging

Rating: 5.0


Above the space
Among countless stars
The moon was rising

I came out and
Lit up my cigarette
Under a tree
Looking at a tree

I felt
That I am belonged
To the earth
As if trees

I felt
That I am belonged
To the universe
As if stars
And the moon

Though not to you
I came back
After the smoke
Disappeared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2017

I am a a part of the universe, I belong to something bigger than life. they are great themes.. especially the thought something bigger than life. this is a point to meditate. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, tony

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Udaya R. Tennakoon 27 April 2017

Thanks dear tony

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Adeline Foster 20 June 2016

A Very good poem with such a broad scope. But the am is not necessary. Perhaps it could read: I felt That I belonged To the universe As do stars And the moon. Enjoyed Adeline

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Roseann Shawiak 18 March 2015

Feeling a part of the universe, belonging to something bigger than life itself. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Roseann Shawiak 18 March 2015

Feeling a part of the universe, belonging to something bigger than life. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, RoseAnn

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Dave Walker 11 March 2015

A great poem about belonging.

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