Above the space
Among countless stars
The moon was rising
I came out and
Lit up my cigarette
Under a tree
Looking at a tree
I felt
That I am belonged
To the earth
As if trees
I felt
That I am belonged
To the universe
As if stars
And the moon
Though not to you
I came back
After the smoke
Disappeared
A Very good poem with such a broad scope. But the am is not necessary. Perhaps it could read: I felt That I belonged To the universe As do stars And the moon. Enjoyed Adeline
Feeling a part of the universe, belonging to something bigger than life itself. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, RoseAnn
Feeling a part of the universe, belonging to something bigger than life. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am a a part of the universe, I belong to something bigger than life. they are great themes.. especially the thought something bigger than life. this is a point to meditate. A great poem, loved it! Thank you, tony
Thanks dear tony