Bereft: An Assumption (Etheree) Poem by Seamus O' Brian
Bereft: An Assumption (Etheree)
Rating: ★5.0
i
wander
in the mist
of the gardens
caught between time and
eternity. Asking
Which path caught your eye, stole your
Heart, when you wandered from my side;
left me wondering if I ever
knew where the horizon of your heart lay.
Monday, December 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(An Etheree is a 10 line, non-rhyming poem which starts with a single syllable, and each subsequent line is 1 syllable longer)
Sometimes the journey of a poem seems to come from within itself. I began this exercise with the single letter 'I' not really knowing which direction it would take. Apparently my love of hiking chose to mingle with the image of lost companionship and determine the horizon of this piece.
Sometimes the journey of a poem seems to come from within itself. I began this exercise with the single letter 'I' not really knowing which direction it would take. Apparently my love of hiking chose to mingle with the image of lost companionship and determine the horizon of this piece.
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poems By Seamus O' Brian
Best Poems
Best Member Poems
Best Classical Poems
New Poems
New Poets
Best Member Poets
Best Classical Poets
Explore Poems
Explore Poets
Poem Of The Day
Love Poems
Baby Poems
Death Poems
Sad Poems
Birthday Poems
Wedding Poems
Nature Poems
Sorry Poems
Hero Poems
Poetry E-Books
Delivering Poems Around The World
Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...
4/23/2024 6:52:55 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A wonderful write. I really like this style of writing. Etheree has really caught my fancy. I'm gonna try it. An excellent depiction of love n loss. A huge 10.