Rain Poems: 99 / 500

After The Shower- Haiku

Rating: 5.0

Down the branch it crawls
Catching sunlight as it falls
Glisten, drop of rain

After The Shower- Haiku
Thursday, September 8, 2016
Rain Poems: 99 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,rain drops
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R Soos 19 November 2016

the words present a perfect picture in my mind of the time right after the storm - Rich

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Seamus O Brian 20 November 2016

Thank you, kind sir, for your gracious words. I have truly enjoyed reading your work, and look forward to more in the future. Thanks again, NB

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Kathy Van Kurin 24 May 2018

After The Shower Seamus O' Brian, To be aware of gravity and the movement of water, for it is in the force of gravity and movement that the sun does it's beautiful work. Lovely simple poem that I can enjoy. You are an excellent poet. I have yet to write a true haiku such as this. Blessings, Kathy

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Narayana Aghalaya 09 March 2018

Lovely Haiku - seventeen syllables; seventeen gems!

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

Thank you, kind poet! A gracious comment is always a joy to receive. Be blessed, my friend! S

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Rebecca Navarre 03 March 2018

Wow! ! ! ! ! A Breath Taking Haiku! ! ! ! ! Beautiful Painted! ! ! ! ! Awesome Imagery! ! ! ! ! And Beautiful Photo Too! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 1OS! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

Hi, Rebecca! Happy Spring! Thank you for your always gracious encouragement. You always make me smile. :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 February 2018

Beautuful poem on nature in concise. Dear Seamus, your perception on rain drops has been nicely portrayed. Thanks for sharing.

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Seamus O Brian 09 March 2018

Thank you, Kumarmani! I am so glad to be able to share a little spring-time nature with you. Be blessed, my friend. S

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Glen Kappy 12 August 2017

neal, i see many have commented positively on this haiku- and deservedly. cool! like many i like, i think, i've seen that- why didn't i write it? thinking of this and your longer poems, it displays your verbal nimbleness. -glen

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