M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 166,552 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Between Odds - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Some thoughts are still struggling to take off
Some doors are yet to find the keys
There are few a unanswered questions
And some answers for which questions are not found.

The jigsaw puzzle this life throws at us
Some pieces remain mystery yet
They appear in flashes like a rainbow
Leaving trails of misses and catches.

They are not living their dreams
since clouds of fear surround everywhere
the sunrays struggle, to pierce dark fears
emotions kept in check, to rise with the waves.

Thought echoes back probing questions
Answers yet far from reach
Among them, we live life enjoying
True game of luck against hard work.

Topic(s) of this poem: life, love and life

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Between Odds by M. Asim Nehal

  • (11/26/2015 7:09:00 AM)


    This odd is very enjoyable and challenging, liked it Asim God bless u. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/25/2015 3:56:00 PM)


    Sometimes thoughts struggle for more time but we need to feel these living with dreams in interesting vision. Wise poem shared.10 (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/25/2015 12:04:00 PM)


    Through age and experience comes wisdom. My most profound experience with this, is that I realize now that I know nothing. That does not keep me from asking questions and seeking answers. But life does not give these up
    Thanks, Mohammed
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  • B.m. Biswas (11/25/2015 8:15:00 AM)


    there is an answer of the question...how this poetry is? ...ans..excellent.....thanks.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 25, 2015



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