Between The Shores Of My Heart❤️ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Between The Shores Of My Heart❤️

Rating: 5.0


Between the shores of my heart
Under the flowing lustrous holy river
Where the white dove of wishes
Floats on the chariot of stars
Teasing drunken mischievous moon.

I make a bridge of love to drink
From the intoxicated lips of fate
Which will fill drop by drop, my cup's thirst
Where the virgin red roses
From the exotic garden of bosom
Waits to get crushed under passionate action.

The cerise shyness on her cheek
Will melt by the firewood of my passion
Making the sheet underneath sweaty with pearls
And two uncut diamonds in dark night
Will luminescence my heart's mind
Millions of joy will remove the fatigue
And the scent will be carried by the wind.

Saturday, September 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and dreams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 19 September 2020

Sublime love poetry. Superb flow... The cerise shyness on her cheek Will melt by the firewood of my passion Making the sheet underneath sweaty with pearls And two uncut diamonds in dark night

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Zoyza Da Vinka 19 September 2020

Uncut diamonds are eyes and the body as a metaphor for life is amusing

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Michael Jack 19 September 2020

Great poetic expression. Words flow straight to the heart.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 September 2020

My favourite lines are........I make a bridge of love to drink From the intoxicated lips of fate Which will fill drop by drop, my cup's thirst Where the virgin red roses From the exotic garden of bosom Waits to get crushed under passionate action. What a marvelous poem! Five stars.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2020

Between the shores of heart a bridge is made and dreams are carried on with due love to materialize in this Earth. Love's wonderful perception is beautifully narrated with interesting note. This poem is brilliantly penned....5 full stars!

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S H 23 September 2020

Excellent: The cerise shyness on her cheek Will melt by the firewood of my passion Making the sheet underneath sweaty with pearls

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Gordon Walter 23 September 2020

Wonderful words, free flow of thoughts and great imagery.

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Deepak S S 21 September 2020

Superb Poem, Just can't stop reading the flow and the words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 September 2020

A bridge of love! ! ! ! With the ridge of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Nosheen Irfan 20 September 2020

What a poetic delight! What a masterpiece!

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