! ! Beware Lucifer Effect Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! ! Beware Lucifer Effect

Rating: 3.1


Lucifer came down from his dark empire
in angelic uniform from miles and miles away
traversing mountains and oceans, wild flowers
morining due and silky clouds
to lift a pure diamond in disguise
pure diamond did not realize in short his demon mind
and plots he played behind, plots from Hell
he changed his names, colors in various shades and
even placed a bomb from his mean kingdom,
plotted the meanest of game from his
Hell dominated Lucifer dominated heart
he came down from his heights to degrade
his worth and tried even to sing a love song
eternal........

PLAN (FILTHY) A DAY

Is & Yo
Plus a grin

fails
flops
sinks
in Oceans depth, thanks kind angels
and Lucifer runs back for life
chased by Diamond
her machine gun and pointed heels

For him it is first lesson



for a special angel F (long name) J
August 6,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rema Prasanna 07 August 2008

Oh, Frank it is a stellar effect of Is and You.. indeed..one more shade..I hope you understand Satan well

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 07 August 2008

Very interesting perspective, and vividly expressed....I noticed this evening, that there were several poems by several members, dealing with the interperitations & quasi-entities of Satan, and his bilious impact on our world.Did i start something bad, the other night? ......Talk about having an '''EFFECT''' on something or someone! lol! Excellent work, as per usual for you, Rema...WELL DONE INDEED! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Ramesh T A 07 August 2008

Though Lucifer is driven out it appears everyday like in the Onida TV advertisement to lure the innocent prey. Like the Question and Answer session between Vikram and Vadal the transaction between Satan and Men go on forever. Only the strong minded can win in the test always! Cheers!

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Tapas Baidya 07 August 2008

Angel always wins and lucifer goes back - it is the common conclusion of Indian literary creation. The middle part of the poem is not understandable. Thanks a lot. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata

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Gayatri Nambiar 07 August 2008

chase lucifers with machine guns bhabi, chase them with pointed heels.. dont allow Lucifers and devils... them back, join you 10 ++++ Gai

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