! Soldier Vs Terrorists! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Soldier Vs Terrorists!

Rating: 3.0


Soldiers fight straight wars
near the boundaries of mother
nation and safeguard humanity
and at the end die like a martyr...

Terrorists hide from timid caverns..
conspire and plant malignant
explosives on innocent lives
and instantly devastate peaceful
existence...

Eco friendly planet earth cries for ever! ! !



August 18,2008
3.15 pm

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 18 August 2008

Short but so beautiful...written with a heart, a fight for peace thats all we need for a better world! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+

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Mamta Agarwal 18 August 2008

frank and honest. some fight for peace, others will trade peace to fight and prove they are right.10 Mamta

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Rema Prasanna 18 August 2008

fight straight for a cause.............fakes and artificials......pls don't attack me from all around....

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Indira Renganathan 19 August 2008

I agree withC.T.Heart..fight for peace.Nice write.Thanks for sharing

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Ravi Sathasivam 19 August 2008

Fight for cause is acceptable. But even a war is bad.

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Rajnish Manga 06 February 2020

A small poem presenting a comparative picture of a patriotic soldier vis-a-vis a coward terrorist. Amazingly articulated. Thanks.

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Kesav Easwaran 27 August 2008

nationalism and terrorism...together they thrive on one and one eco friendly earth only...the mind inside a turmoil of attack and defense...poem brightened up with enlightened vision...10

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Ivan Donn Carswell 20 August 2008

The use of deadly force to effect national or idieological objectives invariably polarises moral issues. Self defence is probably the only justifiable use of such force. Modern notions of self defence however tend blurr at the edges. Rgds, Ivan

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 19 August 2008

Honesty and truth expresssed in poetic form Violence is the citadel of incompetence

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rohit sapra 19 August 2008

Contribution of the soldiers is truly commendable which shows how hard they try to protect the nation from the evil eyes of terrorism which is the most dangerous enemy of the planet earth. You expressed your point of view really very nicely in this poem.

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