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! ## Mute Hunger

Rating: 3.2
An ache perforates veins deep
Blood cold as moods of night
tears fall on food I eat
tears fall on food withered
Filled platters, piled up trash bins
Plastic flash cards' redeemed poise
Classy high end festive foyers
Dim lit reckless long end revelry
Minds relaxed on refined comforts
jaded dried leaves spread apart
life shriveled, cry for food
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Chitra - 20 July 2008
an eyeopener, definitely will move us into action
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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 July 2008
Great poem for great cause! Reminded my poems(to some extent) MY MOMENTS & MY SWEAT. sathya narayana
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Abha Sharma 20 June 2008
Wastage of food is against all moralities, religion also condemn if we disrespect food, Good you have taken up this cause to invoke awareness, I hope this reaches far and wide and the poor souls handcuffed with hunger are relieved… Abha
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Dr.subhendu Kar 14 June 2008
life shriveled, cry for food hear my heart from unknown souls................ yet the hunger fledges the fire soul yet at criss-cross redoubts the grave tears gleans ruefully across the living still rags the life reeking the rage in the belley................wonderful poetry with the metaphors that flows terribly piecing the rich valley, yet ingenious unnerves the heart, peace flecks away abruft when inflicted upon, great write, i do admire as when humanistic appellation, ++, thanks for sharing
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premji premji 13 June 2008
hunger, that's the largest religion on earth! read my poem world's largest religion
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 June 2008
the norm... when we got aplenty we don't even think... of wasted foods could save life of others dieing of starvation
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 June 2008
A nice poem with a cause and concern of the hungry lot I liked the diction.It is a difficult task to compsoe a poem with these subjects. Still you have crafted it very nicely
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Rani Turton 11 June 2008
The coexistence of hunger and waste side by side amazing. Thanks for bringing this topic up.
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Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008
This is something that those of us in the west are familiar with. We have been aware of this for some time and we actually do have some voluntary programs to this effect. It is no where near enough. As for your poem. I would rather your poem be a bit more clear in its wording. A poem with a purpose like this one, can't afford to be misunderstood. GW62
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Satheesan Rangorath 11 June 2008
HI Rema Prasanna A timely topic, very relevant to our present situation.I think we have to have a deep thought about our extravagance inm wasting very thing we have.Good poem with a punch. thnaks for sharing Greetings Satheesan rangorath.
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