From Ice Age glaciers to
Big Bang manifestations
Science of matter, relativity and
Quantum Mechanics on a
mission to capture the whole lot
of concealed mysteries of life,
excavating precise matter and
fastidious orbital planets of cosmic
universe on a hypothetical configuration
Life meanwhile breathes for its phase
like black hole of cosmic facade
predictably fall down and wither...
several propositions attuned to
understand correlation of life
and cosmic globular creations,
where science of matter plows to
attain a factual measure to carry on
Space journeys and satellites
besieged to traverse on a
resolute truth hiding in a categorical
place on which quantum mechanics
diversifies its curiosity to presage and
reel out its ramification on life in specific..
Einstein, Hawkins or God play dice with
cosmos in universe or toss them away....
Universe and its convolutions
a tangled mystery rolling on
millions of unanswered conundrums.....
A song by Donovon contains the words: 'Oh God is playing marbles With his planets and his stars/Creating havoc through my life through his influence on Mars ' this poem reminds me of these words. Good poem, Rema, and very thought-provoking. Thanks.
Don't tell anyone, but I love discussions like this. I love your perspective as well. I share it, as I share a love of this writing. Putting things in perspective is a poets calling. GW62
funny, all these cosmic conflicts are just to explore emptyness, where everything exists! well written rema
World is full of conflicts and one of such conflict is of the outer space or so to say the world unknown which the scientists claim to have known which is really a doubt in my mind at least as everyone seems to have several definitions for one thing which also isn't exact to be and now Aliens are too thought to be residing among us. So what to believe and what not is really a conflict. This poem of yours is really well written and the topic you chose is interesting.
In my school days I used to marvel at the bright and vivid pictures of the distant nebulae, constellations and other celestial bodies. Today I realize that most of those images are false coloured ones, approximated realities to demystify the cosmos! Nice description of human scientific endeavour and the challenge it faces.
True..cosmic mystery is veiled eternally.exceptionally good
....a thoughtful expression indeed....10+ ..there are vast 'dark matter' in the space too, telescope or radio antena can not detect what is inside there...
we do not need to know themechanics of the universe to know that it exists and is seemingly directed by an intelligence far superior to our owm But the monkey mind of man ever curious has to make the attempt to understand
very well written, the conflict of a world unknown is so very well depicted, fine phrases
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Great Reema! It is wonderful to read your poem and find that you have mentioned things about which I have been reading for a long time now & also making notes! Now I am reading -THE TAO OF PHYSICS by Fritjof Capra; a book you will love to read! -Raj Nandy New Delhi