! Cosmic Conflicts! ! ! Poem by Rema Prasanaa

! Cosmic Conflicts! ! !

Rating: 3.1

From Ice Age glaciers to
Big Bang manifestations
Science of matter, relativity and
Quantum Mechanics on a
mission to capture the whole lot
of concealed mysteries of life,
excavating precise matter and
fastidious orbital planets of cosmic
universe on a hypothetical configuration

Life meanwhile breathes for its phase
like black hole of cosmic facade
predictably fall down and wither...
several propositions attuned to
understand correlation of life
and cosmic globular creations,
where science of matter plows to
attain a factual measure to carry on

Space journeys and satellites
besieged to traverse on a
resolute truth hiding in a categorical
place on which quantum mechanics
diversifies its curiosity to presage and
reel out its ramification on life in specific..
Einstein, Hawkins or God play dice with
cosmos in universe or toss them away....
Universe and its convolutions
a tangled mystery rolling on
millions of unanswered conundrums.....

Raj Nandy 05 July 2008

Great Reema! It is wonderful to read your poem and find that you have mentioned things about which I have been reading for a long time now & also making notes! Now I am reading -THE TAO OF PHYSICS by Fritjof Capra; a book you will love to read! -Raj Nandy New Delhi

0 0 Reply
Rani Turton 02 July 2008

A song by Donovon contains the words: 'Oh God is playing marbles With his planets and his stars/Creating havoc through my life through his influence on Mars ' this poem reminds me of these words. Good poem, Rema, and very thought-provoking. Thanks.

0 0 Reply
Greenwolfe 1962 02 July 2008

Don't tell anyone, but I love discussions like this. I love your perspective as well. I share it, as I share a love of this writing. Putting things in perspective is a poets calling. GW62

0 0 Reply
premji premji 02 July 2008

funny, all these cosmic conflicts are just to explore emptyness, where everything exists! well written rema

0 0 Reply
rohit sapra 01 July 2008

World is full of conflicts and one of such conflict is of the outer space or so to say the world unknown which the scientists claim to have known which is really a doubt in my mind at least as everyone seems to have several definitions for one thing which also isn't exact to be and now Aliens are too thought to be residing among us. So what to believe and what not is really a conflict. This poem of yours is really well written and the topic you chose is interesting.

0 0 Reply
Ranjit Ravindran 17 October 2009

In my school days I used to marvel at the bright and vivid pictures of the distant nebulae, constellations and other celestial bodies. Today I realize that most of those images are false coloured ones, approximated realities to demystify the cosmos! Nice description of human scientific endeavour and the challenge it faces.

0 0 Reply
Indira Renganathan 19 August 2008

True..cosmic mystery is veiled eternally.exceptionally good

0 0 Reply
Sarwar Chowdhury 03 August 2008

....a thoughtful expression indeed....10+ ..there are vast 'dark matter' in the space too, telescope or radio antena can not detect what is inside there...

0 0 Reply
Ivor Hogg 02 August 2008

we do not need to know themechanics of the universe to know that it exists and is seemingly directed by an intelligence far superior to our owm But the monkey mind of man ever curious has to make the attempt to understand

0 0 Reply
Chitra - 19 July 2008

very well written, the conflict of a world unknown is so very well depicted, fine phrases

0 0 Reply
Error Success