Bewilder Heart Poem by Naila Rais

Bewilder Heart

Rating: 5.0


When all the dentils of her sorrows
Were fragmented into shallow sobs
And hovering darkness depressing her dreams
To trover all happiness gone.

In the misty, on the foggy night
Beside the demos on the countryside
She calls the prayer of her unsaid words
But who cares about her silent screams.

Bewilder Heart
Sunday, December 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: depression,girly,saddened,suicide,truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 22 December 2019

Wow! Very incisive words. “But who cares about her Silent screams! ” The stark wound, that your words leave on the readers’hearts remain raw and bleeding.. a shocking poem.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 December 2019

glad am I now that you excell poetess

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Naila Rais 24 December 2019

What is it? ? can you explain

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 December 2019

niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee my comments are not being acceted thanks for reading my poems poetess

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Naila Rais 24 December 2019

Thanks sir for visiting. Hope to see you again. Glad now? ? Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 December 2019

my comments are not being posted why?

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Naila Rais 24 December 2019

It takes some time to come on screen!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 December 2019

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 24 December 2019

very deep and excellently expressed her sentiments and turmoils THOSE who compose slowly are the one's folks read urs too poetess

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Naila Rais 24 December 2019

Ur words are motivating.

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