Naila Rais

In The Mid Of The Night, Depression You Are Killing Me..

I'm waiting for the very person,
Who'll wipe off my sorrows,
The one who will give me a hug,
When I have no hope left.
The one who will take me to heights,
The one who will care for me,
Or make me want to live,
When I'm ready to die.

I'm waiting for the comforting words,
Which will make me smile,
The one which will change my life,
When I have no friends but foes.
The one which will go deep into the heart,
And make me feel proud what I'm,
Or just make me forget all pain,
When I'm weeping in the dark lonely night.

I'm waiting for the very person,
Who will make me fall asleep,
In the middle of the dark nights,
When my pillow is wet with tears.
The one who will keep his hands on my
shoulder,
The one who will accompany me,
Or just try to console me,
When I sit at the corner and cry.

I'm waiting for the very person,
Who will feel my pain,
The one who will understand me,
When I'm irritating though.
The one who knows my heart,
Though I have fake smile on my face,
The one who can understand the stress,
When I have fake laugh for this cruel
world.

I'm waiting for the very person,
Who will get my big hug,
The one who will appreciate my innocence,
Whenever its time for help.

Topic(s) of this poem: depression, hopeless, pain, stress, suicide

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 28, 2018
Poem Edited: Monday, July 2, 2018

Form: Blues Poem


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Comments about In The Mid Of The Night, Depression You Are Killing Me.. by Naila Rais

  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (11/8/2020 6:52:00 PM)

    line 14 " I'm " DOES mean " I am" , but it sounds very strange to me used here. I really don't know what an English language 'expert' would say about it.

    Just in case this is/was about YOU, i'm glad it is from 2 years ago, not today.

    Maybe i commented 2 yrs. ago?

    " When I'm irritating though" i would delete " though"

    last line " it's" , not " its" . ;)

    to MyPoemList

    bri

    :)

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  • Atasha WilliamsAtasha Williams (2/1/2020 9:49:00 AM)

    very deep words from a deep heart. keep writing poet

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  • bal ram adhikari (9/27/2019 4:46:00 AM)

    Dear Poet, I read as well as listened to your poem In the Mid of the Night..It's heart-touching and evocative. Thank you.

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  • Aryan Nuwal (4/29/2019 7:14:00 AM)

    there are no words for the stupendous poem you have written. just loved it...........................

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  • aryan nuwal (4/29/2019 7:07:00 AM)

    Hi Naila Rais, thanks for visiting my blog. those were still my efforts as still I am quite young

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    Naila Rais(4/29/2019 10:39:00 AM)

    Oh! I don't remember when I visited it. Btw thanks for visiting!
    Naila

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  • Anamika UsAnamika Us (4/19/2019 6:20:00 AM)

    ..mmmmmm....great
    Oood

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(4/19/2019 11:22:00 AM)

    Thanks so much dear! :)
    Glad to see u visit.
    Naila

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  • blank blank (3/6/2019 4:49:00 AM)

    your style is simmilar to mine, i hope you feel better soon, i know you will.
    best wishes...

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(3/6/2019 4:59:00 AM)

    Okay.................................
    Thanks again
    Naila

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  • Fahmidul HassanFahmidul Hassan (3/4/2019 6:15:00 AM)

    Tremendous hand of poem

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(3/6/2019 4:59:00 AM)

    Thanks.....................

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  • Rameeza NasimRameeza Nasim (1/21/2019 5:30:00 AM)

    Your poem is so relatable beautifully expressed longings of a loner

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  • Thomas KaneThomas Kane (1/20/2019 8:37:00 AM)

    Depressed pressing onward alone makes for misery in the moonlight. Hope comes subtle or sudden like a cloud clearing or the lumens casted by bulb. Sometimes we can control and other times we can not, so as I too suffer. For that there is this, I press the thought sudden alone is found with itself, and subtle companionship sheds light.

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  • C F (1/5/2019 7:10:00 AM)

    touched by your poem, could feel your pain. you may dwell in sorrow but don't let it consume your sensitive soul.

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  • Joshua ZwaneJoshua Zwane (12/10/2018 5:59:00 PM)

    I encourage you to read more and write more, thanks for sharing.

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (11/27/2018 8:05:00 AM)

    Deep feelings expressed with clarity of thought and mind. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for sharing Naila.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (11/7/2018 4:07:00 AM)

    A great poem! Each stanza articulates a different dazzling facet of this poem! I will find time to revisit it. To MyPoemList (10)

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(11/8/2018 10:36:00 AM)

    Thanx so much sir! ! Hope poem conveyed feelings of depressed well.....
    Naila

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  • Madathil Rajendran NairMadathil Rajendran Nair (11/4/2018 10:11:00 PM)

    I am a little confused - is this one poem or two. One sings about hope and waiting and the other is suicidal. Well, I pray for your wait to get over and for your being happy. From the literary point of view, I liked the one on depression more. Each word in it has the mood of the weeping theme. I like your passion for poetry and the flow in your write. (10)

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(11/8/2018 10:38:00 AM)

    It is the mix feeling of depressed people......
    Hope you liked...

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (10/27/2018 1:47:00 PM)

    Our soul in human body is fragile and weak, our emotions roll one upon another like waves in the sea, our mood swing flows like wind, Night is always scary for some and fruitful for others, you narrated the dark part of the night very appropriately, the best part of the depression is that it goes away once you take charge of your body and emotions. This is a thought provoking poem. Full marks to you for this poem 10+++++++++

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(11/8/2018 10:38:00 AM)

    Thanx sir for full marks..............

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  • Abhipsa Panda (10/6/2018 1:53:00 PM)

    stay calm and patient..good times will also come..hard days teach us how to fight with situations..stay blessed and happy always..keep writing..we love your poems

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(11/8/2018 10:40:00 AM)

    Your words are really awesome.............. So motivating..................
    Love to hear from you........

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  • Abhipsa Panda (10/6/2018 1:52:00 PM)

    A well written poem Naila with very deep feelings.Time tends to change always.Nothing remains static in our life...if there is a problem, then, there will be a solution too..be strong, you are a great writer...we should always be proud of what we are having rather than on regretting what we don't have....you are born with such a great writing skill, everyone has a struggling part in his or her life...

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  • Beach GirlBeach Girl (9/23/2018 4:07:00 PM)

    Hi Naila! Your poem is amazingly poignant expressing ones deepest, darkest and most lonely corners of a heart. I hope you don't really feel this way but if you do, keep in mind we ALL experience depression at one time or another in our lives. Hang in there, keep writing and let it all out.

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(9/23/2018 5:21:00 PM)

    Ur words are really catchy............................
    Thanx!
    Naila

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  • Abhisekh Kumar Gharai (9/16/2018 12:51:00 AM)

    Hi Naila Rais,
    There will be light after the darkness,
    Lustre after the dullness,
    Dawn after dusk..
    Yea, the time interval might be a bit long than longer.
    But it will only teach you to appreciate love wen ever next time you recieve it.
    And you will be able to live the most out of it..
    ..
    I loved the part wen you mentioned,
    You are waiting for smone who will get your Gmail hug.
    That person will be a lucky one.
    ..
    Thanks,
    Abhi

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    Naila Rais(9/16/2018 2:17:00 AM)

    Thanks for your inspiring words......! But what do you mean by Gmail hug? ?

    Naila

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