Naila Rais

Let Me Rise...

Blazing at the gazing sky,
Deep into the heart as the beach comber rise,
Sitting and counting the glazing of the pebbles,
When near the seashore heart heaviness arise...

In the coil letter of her voice roll,
Up to the sky spreading with wind rode,
Like a funnel her soul cries,
Taking her cries to a heaven with a code...

In myth she's hackney,
Or a haddock of Atlantic,
Perfect a awesome belgard,
Hitherto lack of Avid...

Social evils efface sophrosyne,
Burning soul sentiment lunatic,
To bear harry, it's hard,
Yet, deep inside she's trid...

Why these beast gets parry,
It's more torment than the tic,
Why! She has to dree?
O'thee listen every sis bid...

Thou it's a gramercy,
For a present so fantastic,
Whose heart never gets hard,
Hitherto lack of avid...

She is a "WOMAN" mother, wife or sis,
Gives you helping hand when you are sick,
She's a perfect awesome belgard,
Hitherto lack of Avid

Topic(s) of this poem: cry, education, forgiveness, womanhood, women empowerment

Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 17, 2018
Poem Edited: Sunday, May 13, 2018

Form: Stanza


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

For the people who don't respect women, mistreat them and snatch their dignity...

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Comments about Let Me Rise... by Naila Rais

  • Atasha WilliamsAtasha Williams (2/1/2020 3:41:00 PM)

    very deep and inspiring poem. good work. keep on writing

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (5/26/2019 12:51:00 PM)

    She is a " WOMAN" mother, wife or sis,
    Gives you helping hand when you are sick,
    She's a perfect awesome belgard,
    Hitherto lack of Avid....very beautiful poem... thanks

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  • Ramesh RaiRamesh Rai (3/25/2019 9:00:00 AM)

    It is the weakness of women that they feel weak. But the truth is quite reverse. They are holding the entire nature. Although your doubt in the present society can't be denied. Existence of the entire creation can not be imagined without women. Invite you to read my poem Woman. Keep it up. You have to go ahead. Lots of blessings.10++++++ for sharing your thoughts and feelings.

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  • Angelica BustleAngelica Bustle (3/5/2019 1:16:00 PM)

    Love the wording and phrasing of it all, sometimes solemn matters require a solemn form.
    Great piece of work, thank you for sharing!

    Blessings,
    A. Bustle

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  • M Asim NehalM Asim Nehal (3/2/2019 11:40:00 AM)

    They all talk about empowerment of women, the real empowerment comes from within and women has shown that several times as you mentioned, Let every women rise and realise their power. Thoughtful poem Naila.10++++

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(3/3/2019 10:13:00 AM)

    Thanks for voting..............
    Naila

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (3/2/2019 6:37:00 AM)

    I THINK THIS IS ONE OF YOUR BESTEST POEMS WELL DONE 98 COMMENTS PLUS MY VOTE AND 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(3/3/2019 10:12:00 AM)

    Humble thanks.....

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (2/6/2019 2:13:00 AM)

    that Naila Rais
    this poem has garnered 96 comments
    wish one day
    someday
    a star poet be you may
    on at least POEM HUNTERS
    homely stay
    friendly poet me
    does this say

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  • Thomas KaneThomas Kane (12/9/2018 11:55:00 AM)

    I would swear this poem has changed from fantastic to epicly incredible. Either I have lost my mind or the words in my mind only formed halfway the first time. Either way mind lost or not at all cost people must read this.

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (12/3/2018 4:10:00 AM)

    you are a wonderful poetess
    NR
    Thanks you permitted me to read you and comment also
    The world has few poets ///es /poets like you
    may I also be
    some day
    one day
    if not today
    another far away day
    GOD BLESS YOU
    NR

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(12/3/2018 5:24:00 AM)

    May Almighty bless everyone! .....
    But what do you mean? ? ?

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  • Thomas KaneThomas Kane (11/27/2018 9:28:00 AM)

    To empower others is a gift of love that inspires the best 10+++ thank you

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(12/3/2018 5:24:00 AM)

    Ur words are always welcome........ They are inspiring...
    Naila

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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (11/27/2018 8:11:00 AM)

    Well conceived and wonderfully written with conviction. Thanks for sharing Naila.

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(12/3/2018 5:25:00 AM)

    U r Welcome... Thnx for ur words....
    Naila

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (11/26/2018 2:58:00 AM)

    The most beautiful poem about a WOMAN I ever read this morning. Especially when in these times more women get hurt when they are walking alone in the streets. When most women are attacked by men just to be raped or if they oppose, they would be killed. Or if they open their mouth to give a clear response to their spouse they would be slapped. Thank you so much for sharing. Our life must be based upon true love. The only solution

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    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(12/8/2018 9:40:00 PM)

    Keep writing, Naila, you create such beautiful poems, powerfully worded Truly excellent! G.B.U. Amen

    Naila RaisNaila Rais(12/3/2018 5:26:00 AM)

    A great great comment..... Reality you have mentioned....
    Stay blessed Always....
    Naila

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  • Abhisekh Kumar Gharai (9/16/2018 1:01:00 AM)

    This poem realised me the sacrifices made by my mother..
    Lovely poem.
    Very beautiful.
    .
    Thanks,
    Abhi

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    Naila Rais(9/16/2018 3:25:00 AM)

    Thanks for your valuable words! ! !
    Naila

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (9/9/2018 6:26:00 AM)

    A society which does not bestow respect and dignity on women, cannot claim to be civilised or progressive. Whatever change has come is because of the tremendous achievements made by women during the past few decades. They have shown that nothing is impossible for them to achieve in any field. Thanks, Naila.

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  • Shskil Ahmed (9/5/2018 11:16:00 AM)

    beautiful poem with nice images, thanks

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    Naila Rais(9/5/2018 5:13:00 PM)

    Okey!
    Naila

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  • Manaswini Dash (9/5/2018 3:27:00 AM)

    A nice poem with a nice thought.Really wonderful.10 **********10

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    Naila RaisNaila Rais(9/5/2018 3:44:00 AM)

    Thnx
    Naila '

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  • Pk john (8/22/2018 5:19:00 AM)

    Wonderful..... Last stanza is really insightful...

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  • Tinashe Mupedzapasi (8/21/2018 1:40:00 AM)

    what a great poem...thank you for sharing

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  • Shakil Ahmed (8/11/2018 9:12:00 AM)

    Add a comment.What a nice poem amazing.

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  • Cheryl TutaanCheryl Tutaan (8/7/2018 8:46:00 AM)

    Wow...this is an amazing write indeed! Thank you for sharing, Naila...
    A highest 10++++
    Cheryl♡

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