Beyond The Barrier Poem by Sandra Fowler

Beyond The Barrier

Rating: 4.9


If this became the last day of the world,
The sun and moon and stars mosiac hurled
Beyond the barrier of time and space
While we stand locked together face to face

What would we see behind the barbed wire
Dividing earth and water, air and fire,
Who look no farther than each other's eyes
Where even hell admits of no surprise?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 19 November 2007

A very inspiring write of yours, Sandra...i love it.. Love, meggie

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Bill Grace 30 September 2007

She just stuns me and I mean this in the most profound and positively powerful way. Somehow a merging of Frost's 'Fire and Ice' and Elizabeth Browning's 'How Do I Love Thee' a poem as extraordinary as the land that helped to give it life. Bill Grace

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Alison Cassidy 18 September 2007

'To gaze into another's eyes and see one's own dignity mirrored there'. This is my idea of heaven and my response to your graceful words. An inspiring piece. love, Allie xxxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 September 2007

Impacting thought...You paint armageddon with stunning imagery....and a wee smack of the abstract dark...Very well done, young lass! FjR

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Jim Foulk 20 April 2007

a very beautiful well said piece of great poetry.

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Nikunj Sharma 21 November 2009

this is amazing write..........the depth of your meaning capsizes the reader...keeps him hooked...........wow is the word

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 August 2009

Astonishing imageries! heart crunching this poem i loved dear sandra! excellent! 10+

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premji premji 13 June 2009

what a poem........ absolute love................ i feel that warmth............... i hear those heartbeats....... you will vanish, but your words will never...............

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Tsira Goge 14 November 2008

It was pleasant to me awfully... Very strong poems...10...... Thank you, Sandra.......... Best wishes, Tsira

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A poem of high inspiration and profound strength. I enjoyed it. (10/10) Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded

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Sandra Fowler

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W. Columbia, WV, USA
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