If this became the last day of the world,
The sun and moon and stars mosiac hurled
Beyond the barrier of time and space
While we stand locked together face to face
What would we see behind the barbed wire
Dividing earth and water, air and fire,
Who look no farther than each other's eyes
Where even hell admits of no surprise?
She just stuns me and I mean this in the most profound and positively powerful way. Somehow a merging of Frost's 'Fire and Ice' and Elizabeth Browning's 'How Do I Love Thee' a poem as extraordinary as the land that helped to give it life. Bill Grace
'To gaze into another's eyes and see one's own dignity mirrored there'. This is my idea of heaven and my response to your graceful words. An inspiring piece. love, Allie xxxx
Impacting thought...You paint armageddon with stunning imagery....and a wee smack of the abstract dark...Very well done, young lass! FjR
this is amazing write..........the depth of your meaning capsizes the reader...keeps him hooked...........wow is the word
Astonishing imageries! heart crunching this poem i loved dear sandra! excellent! 10+
what a poem........ absolute love................ i feel that warmth............... i hear those heartbeats....... you will vanish, but your words will never...............
It was pleasant to me awfully... Very strong poems...10...... Thank you, Sandra.......... Best wishes, Tsira
A poem of high inspiration and profound strength. I enjoyed it. (10/10) Joseph Josephides - Member of the International Society of Poets (ISP) Intern.Library of Poetry awarded
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very inspiring write of yours, Sandra...i love it.. Love, meggie