Big Zero Or Pied Piper Of Hamelin Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Big Zero Or Pied Piper Of Hamelin



Billions of yesterdays evaporated
Trillions of events vanished— forgone

Dreamy futures hug pale presents
Pasts weep from coconut tree hole
Like infant birds— mutely

These unlimited physical
And meta-physical demands
Boundless chemical
Or biological feelings— hollow

Both prince and street children will
Taste the same door entrance
Big zero or pied piper of Hamelin— coming

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 24 June 2009

Simply a poem par excellence. CP

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Raj Arumugam 24 June 2009

mystical, deep, penetrative insight into the mystery of life; the poem is obviously multi-dimensional in its meaning as evidenced by the responses you've had...

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Billions of yesterdays evaporated Trillions of events vanished— forgone ..... centuries passed but for passing is only one door..... beautiful and eye catching imaging with brilliant flow of events... i love it....10 i wrote: yes to to: ' and 'Butterflies around'

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Lynda Robson 22 June 2009

Most thought provoking write, well done my friend, 10 Lynda xx

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Catrina Heart 22 June 2009

a marvelous poetic expose of truth in our lives...Reality speaks! ! ! 10+++

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Pandian Angelina 27 June 2009

Yes, as King Solomon laments Life is nothing, life is nothing! No one can reach the heights Of your imagination or imagery Sir, excellent work of word art! I'm not worthy to comment on likes of you But, thanks for giving me the oppurtunity To read and enjoy your poem. Angel

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Satheesan Rangorath 26 June 2009

Again another wonderful poem with an aesthetic sense of a poet.Well written with imagination and controlled vocabulary. Greetings Satheesan rangorath

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Marieta Maglas 25 June 2009

''These unlimited physical And meta-physical demands Boundless chemical Or biological feelings— hollow '' it is really, indeed an extraordinary poem....10++++

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a wonderful write....crafted beautifully...10

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Brishti Mazumdar 25 June 2009

Dreamy futures hug pale presents Pasts weep from coconut tree hole Like infant birds— mutely ...Wow, , , , What a thought process! ....Again I am charmed with your capacity of expressing important things in a very few words.....A rare quality....10++ Always from Brishti with love....

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