Candy Verse Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Candy Verse

Rating: 5.0

1. Singing rain dancing
Mosquito’s birthday ceremony
Raining pleasure breeding

2. Saw the edge of dream
Rainy needles towards destination
Ninny perception

3. Virtual cloud
Cyber rain
Friendly soft
Eating brain

4. Browsing wave
Searching tool
Chatting baby
Net too cool

Afzal Shauq 31 May 2009

perfect stanzas dear friend... really i enjoyed them...well done.. your style of writing poem is different then all and i like your poetry... sweet ideas with poetic flow and meaningful thoughts...10 +++++

0 1 Reply
Raj Arumugam 01 June 2009

The quartet has excellent turns of poetic phrase that are essential into coming into bringing forth poetry rather than mere verse: Mosquito’s birthday ceremony/ Rainy needles towards destination/ Cyber rain/ Chatting baby Just love the poem!

0 1 Reply
Indira Renganathan 01 June 2009

Superb althrough...words really turned into meaningful poetry...especially 'Mosquito’s birthday ceremony'...very pleasant like rains

0 1 Reply
Allemagne Roßmann 02 June 2009

superb flow and magnificent techniques employed here.Khhita khobor bhaijaan/khhita mato reba? Vala asen nani? ....................10++

1 0 Reply
Smiley Hooker 03 June 2009

wow, mosquito's celebrating birthday! i don't wanna be there but you've made it quite interesting! a cleaver and imaginative write as always.10: -)

1 0 Reply
Maria Barbara Korynt 11 August 2009

Contents and a form are enrapturing me. These are fine writing and expressing in few words, so a lot 'feeling'. It is necessary to be an unusually sensitive man in order to feel the ones form, into the so subtle, and at the same time precise way. Admittedly and am and supporter 5.7,5 - however and reading, that old champions haiku '., used the similar form.Admittedly and am and supporter 5.7,5 - however and read, that old champions haiku '., used the similar form. There is an adopted principle which I favour: keeping the time (teraż niejszy) record of the moment (moment) , the motive for the nature, the Lack of Rhymes and one verse.. and structure being in effect. TANKA and other forms, it is ader matter. Beautiful poems, having the deep pronunciation are rising from the haiku. To sum up, fine writing, it is worthwhile reading the Author. Cause - is there what enrapture.(10v.) Greetings. - Maria Barbara Korynt

1 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 04 June 2009

Singing rain dancing Mosquito’s birthday ceremony Raining pleasure breeding.... lol nice one Sarkar and i can imagine how it seems when time of sunsets come....they surely are candy verses and you are the master is changing the theme in words....thanks for sharing bro and sorry for the late rep....10+++++++++ rgds asif

0 1 Reply
Surya . 03 June 2009

hey wonderfully worded and different in look and style. posted 10 love surya

0 1 Reply

Great and unusual images here Ashraful making it stand out from other work! Excellent! Karin Anderson

0 1 Reply
Brishti Mazumdar 03 June 2009

I liked your Candy verse...So simple but so interesting..Luv - Brishti Mazumdar

1 0 Reply
Error Success