Thursday, August 13, 2015
Bird 3 - Hamsa - The Swan Comments
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Irreproachable bird of paradise- The Hamsa!
Imperturbable demeanour,
Impeccable like the snow-white maiden,
Immune to the turbulence outside,
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Ramesh T A
13 August 2015
The significance of Swan is beautifully expressed in poem full of alliteration is wonderful to read!
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12/5/2025 9:19:09 PM # 1.0.0
It is a wonderful creation in your pen. So touching and so haunting. Swan is not only a beautiful bird but also a spiritual bird. It has been astutely inscribed here through alliteration. Let me quote some lines..... Muddy water-yet untouched, unsullied, Magnetic perception to distinguish water from Milk- the essence absorbed in perfect proportion, Meditating chant-Ham-Sa! So-Ham! Mantra of the Saints and Seers, Magnificent Yogic posture - the Hamsäsana! Thanks for sharing.