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Birds In The Bathroom

Rating: 3.5

There was a bird
In my bathroom,
It came in through the ceiling
In through a hole,
Left by the rain.

The first day,
I was mean.
Left the fan on,
Left the light on,

Hoping he would leave;
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Coach Roth 12 April 2008

The life you save may be your own...loved this because it has happened to me...frustrating when you want to save them but they don't speak your language...there's more layers here than just 'a bird in the bathroom'...Coach

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dissatified exmember 30 January 2005

Oh the frustration of a trapped animal in the house. I'm like you. I could never kill it. I even have trouble killing a fly.! Love you poem.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 08 December 2004

Agree. A good effort.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 08 December 2004

You are right to offer praise for yourself in this. Very good. H

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