Birth Of A Poem Poem by ritty patnaik

Birth Of A Poem

Rating: 5.0


a prisoner
of my own wish,
for loneliness.
my soul seperates
to another world,
when myraid thoughts,
make entry,
into my mind.
spearing through
in fast speed,
an idea promptly
developing,
into a poem.

at other times,
all my thoughts,
form into a knotted ball,
and fall into,
a dark abyss
of blackness.

but when i climb,
the staircase of darkness
suddenly a light reveals
to show me, that
i belong to another world
and a new poem is born.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 23 July 2009

The newborn poem is beautiful, hope you had a nice trip! :)

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Rakesh Bedi 23 July 2009

Very well composed, ritty!

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I love this poem.....it's like giving birth to an idea, a concept or a child and to each his own way of giving birth. I love the way you write.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 29 July 2009

different...and amazing. very true, though might seem abstract. loved it. thank you.

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Vaibhav Pandey 28 July 2009

ma'm, , , waht a wonderful poem.....a real pleasure to read and cogitate...I take this to my favs...10

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Raj Nandy 26 July 2009

Most of the time it is the pain and agony of a mother giving birth to her child, and when that child sees the light of day, all pain and agony gets driven away! 10! - Raj Nandy

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Bob Blackwell 24 July 2009

Ritty, this is wonderful, I like to think the words come from some special place, my best poems usually come after a period of quiet, then I just write as the words flow out of me. Regards Bob 10+

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