Birth Of Death -Iii Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Birth Of Death -Iii

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And Brahma forged a form— a female-head,
A mother of the need, of weird form—
Black as born of darkness, tongue and mouth red,
Eyes burning yellow, like a raging storm.

When completed, stood facing where was South,
Confused nigh as to her cosmic mission,
Awaited she a word from good Lord's mouth,
But what he said was lightning from heaven.

Dear daughter, Death art thou— nay, a goodwill,
Thine mission is it to kill life alive,
Born art thou of mine rage, and aught thou kill
Evil and good no less, wise well as naïve!

Hearing of her mission all life to kill,
Poor maid shed tears of genuine deep-felt grief,
But thinking ahead of mankind's goodwill,
The Lord held forth a few drops on a leaf.

Suppressing her motherly grief, somewhat
Emboldened by Brahma's eternal grace,
She breathed courage if but for a moment,
Bowing creeper-like, said with a kind face:

O thou of wise words, be graceful to me,
I wonder why one would want a woman—
A mother and born kind— to come to kill,
Killing life! Know not, how I ever can.

Scared I'm of sin, be thou graceful to me,
Not acting, I can't even imagine,
I shudder to think of slaying many,
No equal am I to the act so mean.

Need there's to allay suffering indeed,
Do pardon me, I seek thine sure refuge,
O ancestor, with folded hands I plead,
Not equal I be to the task so huge.

Let me please thee with arduous tapas,
She said; but still the Lord passed His decree:
Do carry out what thou art born to do,
Worry not, no evil shall come ‘pon thee.

Naught much can be done on what ordained is,
Get on to thine mission, have faith in me,
Thou shalt incur no sin, my word in bliss,
O trigger in the hands of Destiny!

A woman— kind of heart, called ‘pon to kill,
Feigns if she should utter a word of will,
Protest, pretend, nor procrastinate still,
Could say yes nor yet no to bitter pill.
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This poem is a poetic rendition of an episode in Mahabharata. When at the time of Creation life was conceived, the creator Brahma forgot to incorporate death. And life multiplied threatening its very existence. And he had to remedy the situation by creating death along with life. This is the third of the four parts.
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Epics | 03.06.12 |
Topic: death, creation

Tuesday, November 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is the third in the series, one more to come.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C F 06 November 2019

A well penned narrative of Brahmin myth, your words flow smoothly as the sory unfolds.10+

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 November 2019

Thank you really dear poet for the good words. Myths also render a valuable service. Today, science is working hard to find a solution from death and extend life as much as can be. Yet, death renders a helping hand and enables a new body and mind to continue with the evolutionary journey that is not possible to complete in one lifespan. We should learn to welcome death, especially when the body is become old and diseased.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 November 2019

A marvelous poem sir with wonderful rendition of words brilliantly put into 11 brilliant stanzas in epic form! I sincerely appreciate the way this magnificent piece of poetry is penned.................10/10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 November 2019

Thank you so much dear poet, please also read the last part as well and do give me your learned opinion.

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