Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,730 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

*** Bites Of Desire *** - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

I have read in eyes
scarlet red as rilling through wine
desire bites deep of course
yes there you are.

I have felt
Wetly passion by sizzles of rain
like silken shadow flapping
over lush green meadow.

I have looked
rainbow smears spectra colors
through tipsy eyes in redolence
love seems to whisper in resplendent

surf splashes on the beach
love desiccates by shadow and beyond
thirsty summer reels over sandy desert
beauty seems to smite in rage of fire


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  • Tamara Hanaring A Thought Mate (5/5/2009 6:49:00 AM)

    a deep vision of a poet was able to relate the burning beach sand and all that due for what their on it's ground..the ocean became mad while seeing the hottness of his sandy beach..and the waves stive to reach to quench that fire on that land.till all felt that bite of the ocean's desire..1 0+++++

    thirsty summer reels over sandy desert
    beauty seems to smite in rage of fire
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  • Anne Beau (10/22/2008 2:23:00 PM)

    lovely imagery and beautiful wordplay.. i am thrilled you recommended this particular poem to me and i am now intrigued to read the rest of your works. thank you. (Report)Reply

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  • , aryaindia (10/13/2008 12:11:00 PM)

    Within the wine, passion reigns as greenery sprawls while rainbowed dreams are resplendent in the eyes of love that splashes mysteriously through the realm of shadows as those summers conquer the soul of the beauteous desert that surrenders to the fire within, yes, within the wine. Wow.....thanks, arya (Report)Reply

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  • Anjali Sinha (10/12/2008 4:50:00 AM)

    oh! ! ! the bites of desire
    the wet passion of the sizzling rain
    and the thirsty summer -quenched with
    scarlet wine
    very romantic Dr. Kar
    +++10 as always
    regards anjai
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  • Raj Nandy (10/12/2008 12:08:00 AM)

    While in full agreement with comments of Mr. Ramesh, - I would like to add that
    your special brand of imagery in your poems makes them unique!
    - Raj Nandy
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  • Rani Turton (10/10/2008 4:02:00 PM)

    A poem that speaks of passion and with passion. Really beautifully written! (Report)Reply

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/10/2008 12:03:00 PM)

    wow....bites of desire......i love the title tooo (Report)Reply

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (10/10/2008 10:18:00 AM)

    i love this piece Dr. Kar..really comes from the heart..sensual and passionate...
    words of intense love...I know I can learn more from your words..very great piece..
    thumbs up Dr. Kar. Readers cant help to wait for your next piece..thanks. God bless
    Send my love and best regards to the children of Orissa...
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  • Ejiofor AlisigweEjiofor Alisigwe (10/10/2008 9:38:00 AM)

    Steamy. Exotic. Sensuous nostalgia. You are a genius (Report)Reply

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  • Ramesh T ARamesh T A (10/9/2008 3:08:00 PM)

    With play of words you weave many of your poems! Best wishes! (Report)Reply

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  • Tsira Goge (10/9/2008 1:51:00 PM)

    thirsty summer reels over sandy desert
    beauty seems to smite in rage of fire...
    ..................................................
    subhendu, It is one of the best romantic verses, very beautiful and thin... 10...
    Best wishes,
    Tsira
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  • I Love You Truly (10/9/2008 1:14:00 PM)

    i use to know this man, he was a very wonder and OOOO so romantic poet, you brought that memory to me, with you lovely use of words.. thank you, most enjoyable.. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 9, 2008



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