Bitter Words Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Bitter Words

Rating: 4.9


Sun’s direct rays and heat in hot season
Nothing to complain about for any reason
I might have allowed it as casual feeling
Everybody knows and doesn’t expect dazzling

It may not penetrate or cause any harm
Of course it may be hot but not little warm
It is natural and may be expected more
Man will find refuge and feel it was not before

Words spoken with bitterness burn us completely
It will create impact on mind sudden and immediately
You are caught unaware with no defense to offer
Generally what is considered wise is to keep mum and suffer

It may take more time to adjust and recoup
Self assessment for sore relation and slight let up
Insult may cause breakdown with no other way
You may have set back and nothing to offer or say

We may not know what to speak in distress
Mind not at rest and seized with stress
Common sense on run and unable to assess
Hasty action may lead for immediate action to press

Bitter words may bite you slowly
May not allow you to regain immediately
You may find it hard to forget and forgive
You may offer no reaction and remain passive

It is state of mind that only speaks
Not sure of result but inviting future bleak
Damage is done with no possible gain
It is difficult to face insult and pain

Once spoken words with hatred can’t be taken back
Will spoil the relation completely with visible crack
Should not be uttered at all without any sense?
We should have room not to feel tense

Words spoken in friendly way also create tension
Relation will be at stake and in question
It may cause damage and turn it sour
Retrieve the position …………….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nagesh Ratnavelu 01 October 2009

Sun’s direct rays and heat in hot season Nothing to complain about or any reason I might have allowed it as casual feeling

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Severina Dsouza 01 October 2009

It may take more time to adjust and recoup Self assessment for sore relation and let up

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Sangita Rao 02 October 2009

Words spoken with bitterness burn completely It will impact on your mind sudden and immediately You are caught with no defense to offer

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Sita Kesri 02 October 2009

Words spoken with bitterness burn completely It will impact on your mind sudden and immediately You are caught with no defense to offer

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Nooruddeen Mm 03 October 2009

lovely a well written poem Rgds Nooruddeen nooru

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Varsha M 08 March 2021

Sir very true words. Those spoken play all the game. And i feel it's not good or bad or how you spoke that create complete havoc. Sometimes it's the time that steals gsme. Good words in wrong time.

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Miriam Maia Padua 11 December 2009

fruitful poem....we can learn lessons from this Tongue can kill when it speaks sharp words... sharp words are like knife stabbing us to death bitter words can cause damage to one's feelings.... it.s better to be hurt physically than be hurt by painful words... very fine write... 10++++ Snow

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Katey Dempsey 30 November 2009

Damage is done with no possible gain It is difficult to face insult and pain 10

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Rafique Farooqi 30 November 2009

BITTER WORDS ARE HAZARDOUS LIKE bitter sun rays, think before you talk, as it can cause a very adverse situation..................well done 10

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Ratna Patel 23 October 2009

Words spoken with bitterness burn us completely It will create impact on mind sudden and immediately You are caught unaware with no defense to offer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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