Kylee Bartz

Rookie - 12 Points (9-12-96 (September 12,1996) / Attica, New York)

Black - Poem by Kylee Bartz

Black is a mystery
Black looks like fresh ink.
Black sounds like 97.7 rock.
Black tastes like dark chocolate.
Black feels like loneliness, and hope.
Black smells like the salt in blood and tears.
Black is a mystery.


Comments about Black by Kylee Bartz

  • (5/26/2010 8:44:00 AM)


    Black is beautiful with mysteries behind to uncover.
    Well written imagery concepts.
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  • (5/24/2010 11:48:00 AM)


    Black is one of my favourite colours. Well, I have only two actually not too many. (Black and grey.) Black is a mysterious colour like you said and reminds me of the rain. Only seven lines and you said it all.
    Have a nice day.


    B.B.
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  • (5/24/2010 8:53:00 AM)


    yes above all..black is color..that makes the things beautiful, like black hair is the beauty of girls..black eyes are the charm of some one..and bla bla..a lovely poem 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2010 1:41:00 AM)


    Black seems like lonelyness and hope. Thats a good comforter we love it. (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 10:14:00 AM)


    this is one of my fav colors (:
    a mystery it is too *nods*.....i likes fresh ink xP its all...new n stuff
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  • (5/12/2010 8:46:00 AM)


    It shows various aspects of black -great! Brief but powerful. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2010 8:13:00 AM)


    :) ... i love black
    it's remember me in the happiness.... loOlz :)
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 14, 2010


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