Black Out Poem by Amitava Sur

Black Out

Rating: 5.0


The sun has not risen today
The grasses did not have dews,
The flowers did not bloom today
Since they couldn't see -
My beloved's smiling face.


Moon is not casting
Any of her light today,
The stars did not arrive
To blink in the sky today.


The whole sky is covered
With a pitch dark blanket.
How can they celebrate
While the princess is deep asleep! !
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Amitava (18.7.2014)




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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very touching indeed and so poignantly penned I am touched..........Amitavaji

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Akhtar Jawad 21 July 2014

A wonderful write, a nice expression, a lovely poem.

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Geetha Jayakumar 02 August 2014

Lovely poem for beloved princess...Beautiful flow of words, Heartfelt. Loved reading each lines...

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Valsa George 23 July 2014

Nature joins in your bereavement.....! A very moving write! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 July 2014

Princess is in her own world wishing well for all those who dwell here and to one in particular. Beautiful poem dedicated to the loved one.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 July 2014

A poignant, melancholic poem that touched my heart deeply. Hoping you find your inner light soon, I don't like to see you so sad. Really great poem, Amitava. RoseAnn

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* Sunprincess * 21 July 2014

...........very nice...hopefully the sun, moon and stars come out to play soon....and bring a smile to everyone's face....loved reading this one..

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