You look like a black rose
in full bloom.
Your pose and the clothes you wear
Make me stare.
I am entranced hypnotised by your glance
Your raven black hair flowing down your back
Your skin porcelain pale gleaming white
Under in the moons pale light
Your lips a black shade of night
Waiting to be kissed
(please don't resist)
I could list all the ways I love thee
and still not get close
Black rose I love you the most.
everyone needs to express his deep inner heart and this you have done so well the words honest true filled with feeling a fine poem
Oh, any girl would like a poem like this to be written for her! It's very beautiful! ~~Elya Thorn~~
DANIEL...JUST READ 'BLACK ROSE...YOUR REACH & CAPTURE OF IMAGERY IS STELLAR...CRISP, CLEAN FLECKS OF POETIC POISE... NICE PEN! I HAVE A WORK OF THE SAME TITLE, BUT COMPLETELY DIFFERENT IN THEME. I WROTE IT WAY BACK WHEN I THINK GRANT OR LINCOLN WERE IN OFFICE...ANYWAY, I PLUGGED IT INTO poemhunter EARLIER TODAY, SINCE I COULDN'T GET MY CREATIVE SIDE IN STEP TO CRANK OUT A NEW PIECE...'Black Rose' by D. HOOKS is a 10! ''''''''''''''' ~F. J. R.''''''''''''
^_^ Very cute i would say... I love it...it touched me and its deep with the love passion you develop please keep this up i enjoyed this one poem and would enjoy the rest
I really enjoy the uniqueness you express, Finding a true passion in something or someone that would normally be passed up by many others. Good show
It is really awesome! ! ! Full of passionate emotions enough to wake the desires up inside a heart which is romantic! ! ! ! Keep it up....
Everything about this poem is stunning...well written piece straight from the heart.. beautifully composed and the delivery of this magical show of emotion is excellent. Bravo! ! ! ! best wishes Jon
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent poem, I love the way you capture the moment. I can picture this black rose as i read your poem...