Blank Paper And Last Words Poem by Rini Shibu

Blank Paper And Last Words

Rating: 5.0


Petrified
Cannot move
Speechless
Throat is dry
Feel like choking
Breathless
No air to breath
Sweating profusely
Aching
Chest is heavy
Heart
As if stop beating
Dying
Left alone
Want to say something
the last words
Pen in hands
But trembling
When start to write
No words to scribble
Darkness
eyes are closed
Dead
Peacefully sleep forever

Friday, January 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: blank
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 25 February 2018

Wonderful imagery and imaginary. Beautifully presented. Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 25 February 2018

Thanks Kumar for your visit..! !

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Yiyan Han 24 January 2018

Some authors claim they have the so-called writer's block - might be this sort of mind blankness?

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Rini Shibu 24 January 2018

When you are stressed you cannot write.. Thanks

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Muzahidul Reza 12 January 2018

Taking the imagery blank you have written well, thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++ 10

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Rini Shibu 13 January 2018

Thanks Reza for your precious time for reading and for the comment

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 January 2018

Feel like choking Breathless No air to breath Sweating profusely Aching Chest is heavy Heart. wonderfully well you have portrayed the blankness..... thank you dear Rini

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Rini Shibu 13 January 2018

Thanks Dr. Tony for your encouraging words

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