Bizarre Thoughts Poem by Rini Shibu
Bizarre Thoughts
Where to start
and how to end
Who am i and
from where I am
Why i am here and
for whom I am here
Am i planning to
give something
Or going take a little back
Where i will return
and how i will go
If I am not here
will it make a difference
A state of nothingness
Everything in emptiness
How it will be
How could it be
The unanswered questions
But we pretend to be answered
Some rely on science
Others on religion
But there is something
beyond our mind
This is a very good and a very thought-provoking poem about bizarre thoughts.
Where to start and where to end, we think and wonder very often. Thought are wonderful to express in poems. You have shared brilliant idea...10
A beautiful poem Rini..You have left a million of questions to be answered. Yes, many times bizzae thoughts come to every poet's mind....we are not exception to it.....you are a gifted talent! What I feel you have got an intense passion for poetry! Keep it up! May be a bit philosophical but a wonderful poem...10
A poem that compels us to ponder on the purpose of life the reason behind our ceeation. Well penned Rini.10
A wonderful poem, Rini. I concur with Geeta ' s great comment. Our thoughts are unpredictable. And every individual has encountered.these thoughts that you have mentioned. A great write that deals with the realities of life.10
you must also compose a poem like KUMARA MAHAMANI ON AGAINST ABORTION READ MY COMMENT THEREIN...your voice for an unborn child on her behalf has no earthly comparison you are the firs and foremost human to speak on behalf of a girl child unborn and one day will be some one's mom Great poem
Thoughts are unpredictable. They come and go like a breeze. The questions that you have asked are philosophical in nature. Truly, there is a world beyond our mind. Excellent poem Rini.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Rini, a well thought out poem.++10