Bleed... Let Go. Poem by Dislocated Heart

Bleed... Let Go.



seeking for a knife.
planning to take this living soul away.
nice, sharp, shiny knife,
appears on the counter.

gets a hold of it...
grabs it.

wrist up.
knife close.
light cut.
blood pours,
spills,
satisfaction...
ahhh.....................

first dropp of blood hits the floor.
splat-

and again.
continuously...

letting everything go...

i feel so much better.

dont tell me no.
dont tell me dont.
you dont know what i been through.
just let me bleed.

stains my clothes,
as i walk the halls
and suddenly fall.

its the end...
letting go..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alisha Lonz 27 January 2008

your words...are so strong and sharp and beautiful. i felt tears welling up inside of myself as i read them. i truly adore this piece of writing. please, keep pouring your heart out in poetry. it is a dark yet wonderful thing

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Danielle Huffman 03 January 2008

This poem is the one that really touches my soul. I have a poem very similar to this called Bright Red Scream, please check it out.

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Make A Wish 29 December 2007

exactly wut i did. i love this peom

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