Dislocated Heart

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**as The Rain Falls...** - Poem by Dislocated Heart

The rain will fall..
& all I'll do is think of you..

My heart beats to the sound of your voice..
Wanting and needin your love,
Seeing the world turn,
All the harm and hurt that has been done.

But heres something I'll never do.

Tears wont fall from your face.
your heart will never be in 2.
No scars on your arm,
and no one hurtin you.

I'll try and fill your heart with love,
I'll do whatever it takes, to make each day better then the last.

As the rain falls..
This is all I can think bout..


Comments about **as The Rain Falls...** by Dislocated Heart

  • (4/6/2009 2:40:00 AM)

    why is thy heart dislocated? Won't thou give me permission to locate it properly...LOL nice poem..touching ^_^ (Report)Reply

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  • (3/11/2009 5:21:00 PM)

    wow that was so sweet =] i love it. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/10/2009 10:08:00 AM)

    passionate, and something i can relate to in a way
    very nice

    ~kerli
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  • (11/27/2008 3:51:00 PM)

    I love this one
    I can relate to it in so many ways
    And you're right, love can do wonders
    It can take over your mind nd they're all you think about
    I give it a 10
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  • (10/16/2008 12:55:00 PM)

    beautiful writing.....wonderful (Report)Reply

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  • Mohammed Al-balushi (10/4/2008 4:34:00 PM)

    I'll do whatever it takes, to make each day better then the last, iam sure u wil do, lovely peom (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 4, 2008



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