Bless Us With Good Sense! Poem by Subbaraman N V

Bless Us With Good Sense!

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Beloved God! Bless us with good sense
Sense that will act as a great fence
Fence that will protect us and cleanse
Cleanse our thoughts, words and deeds quite tense!
Infested with wrath and envy
Sans reasons - anger, jealousy
Against kith and kin, friends and foes
Drenching with pain, bringing all woes!
Beloved God! Bless us with good sense
Sense of love and warmth quite intense
To shower on all known - unknown,
Good-bad, young -old, poor-rich; seeds sown!
Sown to see them sprout and grow well
Lasting love and peace to prevail
Bringing harmony to the world
Bless us all with good sense- Our Lord!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 24 August 2013

We all need faith, a great write.

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 August 2013

Bless us with good sense. Very well said..Beautiful poem.Loved reading it.

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Itai Oscar 25 August 2013

Bless us, oh, please bless us. loved it! Nice

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Indira Babbellapati 26 August 2013

yes, we all need that kind of blessings...

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Kavya . 27 August 2013

a rich thought indeed.........we all be blessed with these qualities....a gud write Sir

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indira Yammanur 03 October 2013

Amazing work sir, very well scripted and an excellent way to put it.

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Venkatram Shrinivas 02 October 2013

Excellent! A small poem but with highly important Prayers

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Vasudevan K 02 October 2013

Eschew violence and hatred; love others with no evil thoughts in mind; sow seeds of goodness. These simple messages eloquently expressed in a manner that could be easily understood by all. K.Vasudevan

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Venkata Krishna 27 September 2013

Bless us all with good sense- Our Lord! well said respected sir

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Kesav Easwaran 07 September 2013

Excellent prayer poem...rich in faith wisdom and goodwill

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Subbaraman N V

Subbaraman N V

Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India
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