Blessed Poem by Stevie Taite
Blessed
Pop as my waters broke.
So full of anticipation.
Waves of contraction.
Pushed free.
Happy!
Oh burning ring of fire.
Stretched to ripping point.
Then followed relief.
Baby boy.
Joy!
Bearing down, sending your invite.
Come meet your family.
Sister waited excitedly.
Accepted invitation.
Elation!
Perfect mop of dark hair.
I held you close.
You smelt sweet.
Tiny feet.
Complete!
A cascade of overwhelming emotions
Staring into husbands eyes
Happy tears cried
Bursting with
Pride!
Words cannot express how happy.
Joy, elation, complete, pride
I wholly invest
my love.
Blessed.
Beautiful expressions of true appreciation and love abound in this one! I like the structure, well done. Nice flow.
Wow! I like your Style Stevie. You are very good. You style is very impressive. I live the way you travel through words to the last words; happy. Joy, elation, complete, pride, Blessed. Remarkable
Beautiful! Such joy new life brings to your world... Congrats! ! ! ; -) -Kelly.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I've never followed this structure type before. I will do it and let you know how I go. I just utterly love how you write. You truly are blessed with a gift xxx