Bliss Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Bliss

Rating: 2.3


If I told you I don't feel alone
would you think I'm lying?
nobody is with me
I'm here all by myself,
sitting on a bench
watching the tall grass move
listening to the birds sing.
It's hot today
the sun is sharing her heat with me
I'm experiencing fulfillment coming from within,
at this moment
want to join me on this blissful ride?
I'm sending it to you
through the cosmic waves
that connects us all
smile and enjoy it with me
while it lasts.
- maybe forever!
Yes, forever it is.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 01 June 2012

When I read your poetry I see your beautiful spirit flowing from each precious word. You must promise not to tell that Captain Cur is such a softie. It would ruin my reputation! I see a Spanish Galleon with my spyglass. Kasia no more cosmic love my way, until after I loot her. Good hunting!

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Simon Collins 01 June 2012

That's lovely words Kasia

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Unwritten Soul 03 June 2012

You can write as you can and it turn beautiful, maybe the honest and the sense you put it it really make it alive! _Unwritten Soul

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Anita Sehgal 27 August 2012

alone in bliss without being lonely.....beautiful

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Anita Sehgal 27 August 2012

alone in bliss without being lonely.....beautiful

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Heather Wilson 09 June 2012

What a wonderful write, if everyone thought this way what a different world it would be, Bliss.

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Hans Vr 03 June 2012

Wow. This is fantastic. Let us ride all together on a wave of bliss.

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Mukta Sawant 03 June 2012

You have described your happiness very nicely. I loved your sentence formation skills.

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