Kasia Fedyk

Bliss - Poem by Kasia Fedyk

If I told you I don't feel alone
would you think I'm lying?
nobody is with me
I'm here all by myself,
sitting on a bench
watching the tall grass move
listening to the birds sing.
It's hot today
the sun is sharing her heat with me
I'm experiencing fulfillment coming from within,
at this moment
want to join me on this blissful ride?
I'm sending it to you
through the cosmic waves
that connects us all
smile and enjoy it with me
while it lasts.
- maybe forever!
Yes, forever it is.

Comments about Bliss by Kasia Fedyk

  • Anita Sehgal (8/27/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    alone in bliss without being lonely.....beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • Anita Sehgal (8/27/2012 7:53:00 AM)

    alone in bliss without being lonely.....beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson (6/9/2012 2:35:00 AM)

    What a wonderful write, if everyone thought this way what a different world it would be, Bliss. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (6/3/2012 3:16:00 PM)

    Wow. This is fantastic. Let us ride all together on a wave of bliss. (Report) Reply

  • Mukta Sawant (6/3/2012 1:05:00 PM)

    You have described your happiness very nicely. I loved your sentence formation skills. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (6/3/2012 3:43:00 AM)

    You can write as you can and it turn beautiful, maybe the honest and the sense you put it it really make it alive! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Simon Collins (6/1/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    That's lovely words Kasia (Report) Reply

  • Captain Cur (6/1/2012 9:07:00 PM)

    When I read your poetry I see your beautiful spirit flowing from each precious word.
    You must promise not to tell that Captain Cur is such a softie. It would ruin my
    reputation! I see a Spanish Galleon with my spyglass. Kasia no more cosmic
    love my way, until after I loot her. Good hunting!
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Poem Submitted: Friday, June 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 2, 2012

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