A Beautiful Sight Poem by Kasia Fedyk

A Beautiful Sight

Rating: 3.8


A Beautiful sight, I've seen it once.
In a lonely white room
with a bed and a small chair,
table on three feet in a corner holding a bouquet
fortifying the air with the scent of roses
window, a small, round window
in the middle of the pale wall,
exposing messages from up above
in a form of snowflakes, falling so slowly,
a white dove sat on the ledge.
A man was fighting for his life
machine pumping air into his lungs
in a constant steady motion.
~A beautiful sight
Angel wings spread across the bed
hovering over the mans body, healing it,
feeding his soul
with heavenly aroma,
the smiling Angel kissed his forehead
and told me it will be back tomorrow.

A beautiful sight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Simon Collins 09 June 2012

Beautifully described atmosphere with the presence on on angel, thank you

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Besa Dede 10 June 2012

Very touching poem! Beautiful write! Thank you for sharing. Regards, ~Besa

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Collince Sylvans 12 June 2012

this is awesome..u just touch and bring that which is hidden behind ur words. Thank u i love it.

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Ency Bearis 22 June 2012

A delightful poem, with tender touch

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Sharad Juneja 08 June 2012

The big loot is on......when she writes the gems come flying........ so grab as much as u can :)

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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2019

A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A beautiful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Kasia.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 December 2017

Very beautiful pictures drawn in this artistic work....like it

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Dr Antony Theodore 08 May 2016

~A beautiful sight Angel wings spread across the bed hovering over the mans body, healing it, feeding his soul with heavenly aroma, inspiring poem, inspiring faith, beautiful vision of an ever present angel at the death bed or in pain and in suffering........ thank you dear for this faith vision. tony

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Lenny Camacho 08 June 2014

pretty dope imagery...

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Colleen Courtney 08 June 2014

So beautiful it almost brings a tear to the eye. But not a tear of sadness. Just a tear for it's beautiful wording and the faith this wonderful poem inspires in the reader. Nicely done!

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