Blood is indispensable to lives
Love is not less
The only difference
In and out in the heart blood flows
But there love lies.
blood and love...kinda lyk the heart hold tha love and dispenses it around with every heartbeat...nice writting
Mojo! People I heard short is sweet and now i feel your short poem is sweet. It's lucid poem with some food to thought.... A tremendous effort by the poet! Cheers, Keep writing and Keep sharing!
This poem is very nice. You have brought out the thought of how love is needed to sustain the flow of blood very well. Keep writing.
I like this one. Usually the Heart and emotion are simale but here you take it a step further by the mechanical comparison. Good poem.
Exceptional in it's harmonious and gentle meaning. Thank you Karen
A fine succinct poem, great play on language with a sad but truly evocative and romantic ending.
Mesmerizing smoothness in this poem and how it relates to our life... Excellent poem! !
short, but never doubt how a poem could make readers rethink on how they see love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you for this lucid masterpiece of a great poem!