Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 21,595 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Blue Hawaiian Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Bali Hai spirit

beckons me to leave the snow's

wonderland behind


Comments about Blue Hawaiian Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (8/24/2011 6:26:00 PM)

    Your words are too hot for the snow to melt away the readers.Global warming then will be drinking the wonderland.Very well done. (Report)Reply

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  • Ben Gieske (6/12/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    The best of two worlds, but this beckoning would not be hard to answer. (Report)Reply

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  • Joseph Poewhit (1/7/2009 1:12:00 PM)

    If it feels right do it (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, January 7, 2009



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