Jessy Liz


Blue Ribbon Smile - Poem by Jessy Liz

Red roses on piano keys
She's on her knees.
Black sky against green leaves
She's bleeding.
Needles and poison
She's stumbling.
Rainbow pills- static noise
She's falling.
Ballet shoes, blue ribbons
She's giving in.
Sheet music and classic lines
Oh, she's in denial.
Blueyes slipping, flesh is ripping
Still leaving with a smile.
Star of the show, but no one knows
..Oh, she's dying.


Comments about Blue Ribbon Smile by Jessy Liz

  • Brian DornBrian Dorn (10/1/2006 6:24:00 PM)

    Vivid imagery of the depths that lie beneath the surface... hidden from almost everyone. Good write, Jessy.
    Brian
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  • Marilyn White (9/22/2006 11:15:00 PM)

    Love the line that reads rainbow pills static noise! Reminds me of something i wrote once or maybe it was for a research paper.Also takes me back to a place I once was or maybe I am still there. Keep up the flow (Report)Reply

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  • Frank Simon (9/22/2006 4:09:00 PM)

    Jessy- just read this poem, hope it's not truly about you. I think I write better if melancholy or depressed. Love the flow and the line, rainbow pills-static noise.
    Hope this picks you up, or at least embraces you in special way. This poem does for me. Frank
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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 22, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 18, 2010


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