Said she'd never climb another mountain
But said nothing bout a hill
Steep ascent so weary
Dull slope inviting thrill
Said she'd never wear the saddle
Never take another ride
But the pony was out grazing
And she liked the easy stride
Said she'd never cross the valley
Risk the precipice
Took the gully but a moment
For better or for worse
I totally agree With Rose Marie it's beautiful
Thank you so much! I'm glad you both like it!
A beautiful and well crafted poem adorned with compelling images.
Correction: the marriage of words craft images…
I like how the poetic seeing changes when looking at a poem from different angles and through other eyes!
Life itself has many wonders to offer that we could never stop our desire to explore. A beautiful adorned with compelling images.
The marriage of words crafts images with depth seen by the perceptive eye!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
A fantastic poem.....well written
Thank you for your kind remarks dear poet!