Refresh me like the shore
Ever changing neath the tides
Crash Your waves upon me
That final line. Crashing the poem shore. Nice one, Rob
Thank you kindly Kesav for that positive wave of encouragement!
Thank you LeeAnn! !
Beautiful poetic expressions with stunning images.A great succinct write.
I'm surrounded by an ocean of beautiful poetry and sea pens with fluorescing colors! Thank you!
let me buy the love and be fresh in it~
The ocean gives freely to all!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
what beautiful imagery that you crafted for this lovely succinct poem... a billion stars and a fav
Thank you Susan! May your joys outnumber the sands!