Refresh Poem by Rob Lamberton

Refresh

Rating: 4.3


Refresh me like the shore
Ever changing neath the tides
Crash Your waves upon me

Refresh
Monday, January 16, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: waves,change,Trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 January 2023

let me buy the love and be fresh in it~

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

The ocean gives freely to all!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

True love stays for a lifetime, excellent brevity still TOP Marks for you, Rob

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Sylvia Frances Chan 16 September 2024

Although it is already the year 2024, this meaningful poem has kept its freshness and Beauty. TOP Marks and toMyFavourites. Thank you for sharing, Rob

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Susan Williams 31 January 2023

what beautiful imagery that you crafted for this lovely succinct poem... a billion stars and a fav

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

Thank you Susan! May your joys outnumber the sands!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 18 January 2023

That final line. Crashing the poem shore. Nice one, Rob

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Rob Lamberton 31 January 2023

Thank you kindly Kesav for that positive wave of encouragement!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 January 2023

Brilliant Write

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Rob Lamberton 17 January 2023

Thank you LeeAnn! !

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