Blues For Her Poem by Rahman Henry

Blues For Her

Rating: 5.0


Sea fog
Dreadly Waves
Dead sunlight reflected on salt
Astonishingly silent
Seagulls

Andstaring at water foam, me reshufflng my memories

In that apathetic air breath
Smell of your hair
Distressed
Depressed
Pinkish

Wednesday, March 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: blues,love,memories
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 March 2019

appears slightly incomplete say more o poet critique I am poetry read my poem MOMS SMILES U seem to have missed it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2019

Dead sunlight is amazingly reflected on sea shore. You have perfectly captured the imagery. This is an amazing poem on memory....10

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 March 2019

salty, soggy, warmth smelling from your body in this pair eyes blue sea, blue sky, green forest, an excited face around nothing is here on the beach we are each to other...........

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Rahman Henry

Rahman Henry

Natore, Bangladesh.
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