Sea fog
Dreadly Waves
Dead sunlight reflected on salt
Astonishingly silent
Seagulls
Andstaring at water foam, me reshufflng my memories
In that apathetic air breath
Smell of your hair
Distressed
Depressed
Pinkish
Dead sunlight is amazingly reflected on sea shore. You have perfectly captured the imagery. This is an amazing poem on memory....10
salty, soggy, warmth smelling from your body in this pair eyes blue sea, blue sky, green forest, an excited face around nothing is here on the beach we are each to other...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
appears slightly incomplete say more o poet critique I am poetry read my poem MOMS SMILES U seem to have missed it