Tracey Collins

Rookie (11/14/1967 / St.Thomas, On.)

Board Walk..... - Poem by Tracey Collins

Walking down the board walk
from one end of the beach to
the other end, searching for
that hot dog stand...

Then off to A distance
the hot dog stand was spotted
the kids off in pursuit to
place their order...

We all sit down on A
picnic table to enjoy
our hot dogs and drinks
and watch the big oil ships.....

When done we started
our journey, back down
the board walk to our car....

So if you get board
take A stroll down
A board walk enjoying
the site you see......

Comments about Board Walk..... by Tracey Collins

  • (9/14/2006 7:49:00 PM)

    and watch the big oil ships, this makes the poem............. (Report) Reply

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  • (9/1/2006 2:05:00 PM)

    Dang it all-Havent eaten yet and after readin' this piece i'm hungry as all get out.
    Oh well-guess i'll havta wait a little more to eat.
    Great write Trace!
    I guess when ya git bored ya go onna bored walk. Ha! Ha! Ha!
    Gotta gofer now.
    God bless all poets-MJG.
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  • john tiong chunghoo (8/27/2006 7:16:00 AM)

    lovely work, tracey. will explore more of your work. enjoy your single mothering. (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2006 6:13:00 PM)

    Brill Tracey. This reminds me of that song 'under the boardwalk' I'll probably be singing it all night now! x0x (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2006 11:05:00 AM)

    cooooooollllllll poem u got here Tracey

    peace and love on earth

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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (8/20/2006 7:21:00 PM)

    Boardwalk is a Poem that borders traditionalistic Prose...Quite melancholy, it takes one particular segment of the day and finely details it, but in a very relaxed and matter-of-fact manner. i like it a lot, Tracey'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr (Report) Reply

  • (8/18/2006 4:12:00 PM)

    Great rite me Lady........ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 26, 2010

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