Born To Live. Poem by Fay Slimm

Born To Live.

Rating: 5.0


'' - - Let the ties of the heart loose
And shake down soft streams
Of your fine feathered dreamings.
Allow them to fly,
Take wing Into life's pathway
Of unlimited
Space, where failure is not found
And moreover, fear
Will never appear again.
Choice is unbounded.
Do not die before living
Your dreams. Find your zeal
In life's hidden field.where you
Pick every love-seed,
Grow it into a large tree,
The fruits of which free
You to blossom again, and
When ate help you live
Wisely, then your heart gives.
This is your birthright.'' - - - -

So the holy man's words read.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 19 May 2009

wonderful and meaningful composition written................10+++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 May 2009

Sounds like a very wise man, Fay 10

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Juneil Sechico 27 May 2009

well narrated Fay! I now foun you with a great style! I love the title and the message of this piece as well!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 May 2009

The idea is successfully composed with imaginagion. 10++

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whether the holy man say it or not...it is the yearning deep within every soul...lovely piece...i take this into my favs

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Fay, you are a perfect poet.. deep words.

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Fiona Davidson 19 May 2009

Beautiful intense writing...your words inspire Fay....Fi 10+++

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