nimal dunuhinga

Rookie - 151 Points (19, April,1951 / kalubovila East, Sri Lanka)

Bottleneck - Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Her rare astonishing love
It's like Braille alphabet.
You have to touch the raised dots and understand.
But caressing is prohibited since a long time.
Then how can he trace this fragile creature?


Comments about Bottleneck by nimal dunuhinga

  • (3/29/2006 6:36:00 PM)


    A very original hymn to touch. Susie. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/26/2006 12:51:00 PM)


    Extraordinary imagery. An intense mood well sustained. Very original and lovely, Nimal.

    Regards,

    Sandra
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  • (3/25/2006 4:26:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem, nimal. As usual you have crafted this with amazing imagery, painting a detailed picture in a few short yet beautiful lines. I love the title too!
    Blessings to you! -TGR (Theresa)
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  • (3/25/2006 4:23:00 PM)


    Loads of feeling in this.Something very fragile and beautiful within your words.So worth reading.Thankyou.Love Duncan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 25, 2006

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 2, 2006


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