Ken e Hall

Rookie (Last Century / England-Now Australian Citizen)

Bottom Line I Don'T Wanna Loose You - Poem by Ken e Hall

Bottom line I don't wanna loose you
I was a fool to give that girl ‘that come hither eye, '
Insanely making me look such a fool that's true
Without you my lovely I will surely die,

Let's fly together on your magic carpet to see
Over mountains thru a soft silken cloud,
Over the rainbow where you'll find another me
Please don't leave me, I love you, I shout out loud,

Like many a man I've been a chauvinistic fool
Never again I've seen the light an' too much to lose,
Here's roses and chocolates to keep you so cool
Lay down by my side let's make happiness news.


Comments about Bottom Line I Don'T Wanna Loose You by Ken e Hall

  • (8/17/2012 12:06:00 AM)


    I like this a lot, Ken.
    It is definately a wake up call write!
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  • Elna Nel (8/13/2012 1:52:00 PM)


    I see a lovely playfulness in these words, I like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2012



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